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please check this one sentence! it's urgent!
should i write 1 or 2?
1) Love of and curiosity about finance have been the leading factors in my decision to apply to Binghamton University.
or
2) It is the love and curiosity of finance that has been the leading factor in my decision to apply to Binghamton University.
please help me!!!
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Re: please check this one sentence! it's urgent!
I'm not convinced that love is a particularly good choice of word for an application, but the first reads better than the second to me.
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Re: please check this one sentence! it's urgent!

Originally Posted by
Tdol
I'm not convinced that love is a particularly good choice of word for an application, but the first reads better than the second to me.
thanks! what about have? should it be has?
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Re: please check this one sentence! it's urgent!

Originally Posted by
madu410
should i write 1 or 2?
1) Love of and curiosity about finance have been the leading factors in my decision to apply to Binghamton University.
or
2) It is the love and curiosity of finance that has been the leading factor in my decision to apply to Binghamton University.
please help me!!!
An overwhelming interest in finance is the main reason for applying to Binghamton University.
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Re: please check this one sentence! it's urgent!

Originally Posted by
madu410
should i write 1 or 2?
1) Love of and curiosity about finance have been the leading factors in my decision to apply to Binghamton University.
or
2) It is the love and curiosity of finance that has been the leading factor in my decision to apply to Binghamton University.
please help me!!!
An overwhelming interest in finance is my reason for applying to
Binghamton University.
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