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My first name is Ting, name Xiao Ding, 18 years old student. I was born in Kedah. My characteristic always change, the happy time will be noisy, sad time will be peaceful and serene but keep crying...

I'm the person who easily cry as i will show my most brillian smiling face even though i'm sad! My dream is easy, is to win this game, become the future star! Next i want to perform my talent and skill of....

Hello everyone... Am very ppor in english.. Anyone here can check my sentence?? Please correct me..

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My first name is Ting, and my family name Xiao Ding. I am an 18-year-old student. I was born in Kedah. My mood is always changing, when I am happy, I am noisy, but when things are sad, I am peaceful and serene, but keep crying...

I'm a person who cries easily, but I will show put on smiling face even though I'm sad! My dream is simple: to win this game and become the future star! Next I want to show my talent and skill in....
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Hey man! Thank you for your prompt reply.. Really appreciate it very much!
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