Correct my Essay, help me pleas .

[xmagedo]

Pleas, read my Essay, correct it, and tell me the reason .
thanks ahead .

To learn a foreign language successfully you need to spend time in the country where the language is spoken.

Do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.



In order to learn anything, we always need to create the spirit of confident into it, and develop the interest gesture. For those whom are create an excuses to their-selves, I believe it's very hard for them to achieve their Goals, they end up being diffident .
In my opinion, when it comes to languages, there is always a way to learn at least 50% of the language even if you are not at the countries where the language is spoken, by memorizing the letters and watch a documentary in the country's language, to understand more about their culture as well language itself.
I had an experience learning the English language at the country where the people themselves dont speak the English language, But I manage to it . Sometimes we just have to create the motivation to achieve our goals . I deliberately dont agree with the author opinion, neither disagree.
But I believe you can learn the language successfully by communicating with the owners of the language. But sometime, it is very difficult for someone to go to the country where the people speaks the language, or rather, not having the chance .
At last, I believe when someone wants to achieve something in this life, it can happen by creating the spirit of motivation in anything, people may not have the chance to learn, but it can happen when someone is persistent.

[Gillnetter]

Pleas, read my Essay, correct it, and tell me the reason .
thanks ahead .

To learn a foreign language successfully you need to spend time in the country where the language is spoken.

Do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.



In order to learn anything, we always need to create the spirit of confident into it, and develope the interest gesture. For those whome are create an excuses to theirselves, I belevie it's very hard for them to ahevie their Goals, they end up being dffident .
In my opinoin, when it comes to languages, there is always a way to learn at least 50% of the language even if you are not at the countries where the language is spoken, by meomorizing the letters and watch a decoumentry in the contry's language, to understand more about their culture as well language itself.
I had an exprince learning the English language at the country where the people themself dont speak the English lanuage, But I manage to it . Sometimes we just have to create the motvition to ahcieve our goals . I deliberately dont agree with the author opinoin, nither disagree.
But I belevie you can learn the language sucessfully by communicating with the owners of the lanuage. But sometime, it is very diffcult for someone to go to the lcountr where the people speaks the langauge, or rather, not having the chance .
At last, I believe when someone wants to ahcieve something in this life, it can happen by creating the spirit of motivition in anything, people may not have the chance to learn, but it can happen when someone is persistent.

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