Please review the Letter

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Please review the Letter, if any mistakes, please correct it.


Question:
Write a letter to a restaurant manager complaining about the food and the service during your recent visit when you dined in with your family on a special occasion. In your letter:
- Describe the problems that you had,
- Say what were the consequences of these problems,
- Specify an action you would like the manager to take.
Answer:

I am writing to complain about the food items and service when we dined last week at your restaurant.
I have chosen your restaurant for dinner with my family for my parents wedding anniversary. We have faced a few problems during our visit. Firstly, we have waited a long hour to order the items. The waiter was not responded properly while ordering.
After ordered the food items, we have waited an hour to serve the dinner. We are not happy; the way waiter served the food for us. There are few items served by the waiter, which we are not ordered. When we asked about the unordered items, he does not answer properly. Few ordered items are missed out on the list. At the end, we got the receipt, which has the unordered items and the receipt was wrong.
I would like you to take the necessary action about the food and services. Please check with your chef regarding the taste of food and arrange training for waiter to serve the food for customers politely.
Look forward to your action.
Yours truly,
Rahul.

[Gillnetter]

Please review the letter, if there are any mistakes, please correct it them.


Question:
Write a letter to a restaurant manager complaining about the food and the service during your recent visit when you dined in with your family on a special occasion. In your letter:
- Describe the problems that you had,
- Say what were the consequences of these problems,
- Specify an action you would like the manager to take.
Answer:

I am writing to complain about the food items and service when we dined last week at your restaurant.
I have had chosen your restaurant for dinner with my family for my parents parent's wedding anniversary. We have faced a few problems during our visit. Firstly, we have waited a long hour to order the items. The waiter was did not responded respond properly while we were ordering.
The correct tense is "had". "Have" is the present tense. You chose the restaurant in the past.
It was the wedding anniversity of your parents, it is a possessive.
The waiter did not respond.

After we ordered the food items, we have waited an hour for to serve the dinner to be served.
You didn't serve the dinner, the dinner was served to you.

We are not happy with the way the waiter (specific waiter, article required)served the food for us. There are were (past tense) a few items served by the waiter, which we are did not ordered order. When we asked about the unordered items, he does did not answer properly. A few ordered items are were missed out on the list. At the end, we got the receipt, which has had (past tense) the unordered items and the receipt was wrong.
I would like for you to take the necessary action about the food and services. Please check with your chef regarding the taste of the food and arrange training for the waiter to serve the food for to customers politely.
The part about the taste of the food is new. You could start this sentence this way, "Also, please check with your chef..."
Looking forward to your action.
Yours truly,
Rahul.

You should work on tenses. If an event happened in the past, you have to consider that when writing.