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Old 30-Jun-2005, 03:57
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With reference to the above matter, 1 Utama have agreed to waived a security deposit of RM1,000.00.

TVC Television Channel Sdn Bhd hereby will take full responsibility for all the damages occur in the premises.

Need to write letter.. Please check above.
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If Utama is an individual, it should be 'has', but if a company you can use has/have.

I'd say 'for all damage that might occur' or 'damages occuring'. The former sounds better because it sounds less certain that there will be any damage. I'd also use 'damage' uncountably.
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Should it not be "on the premises"?
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Ooops- quite right.
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