Short paragraph

[lovemake1]

Sorry, For confusion :"(

[Rover_KE]

Hi, Please help fix grammar mistakes in my paragraph.
and if possible, please suggest areas where i can improve on.
I would like to make it sound as good as possible.
Thank you.

Comparing the standard of English in the above, lovemake, and in the erudite and scholarly paragraphs which follow, it is clear that you are blatantly attempting to plagiarise the work of a much more highly educated writer.

Rover

[lovemake1]

sorry if i may have created confusion.
im currently in University, been speaking english for 7 years.
although, i can comfortable speak english.
i tend to make gramatical mistakes, and for that
i wanted to see if i can get any suggestion. as proofreading is always good
for enhacing my essay.

Sorry once again. for not clarifying enough.