correct my essay please

[lainah]

i have been South Africa during three months .i have meet interested people.South Africa people have been very impolite and say that i must speak Zulu .South Africa is a country very developed ,the is many roads and building .i am live in Bedfordview and come to abc in a bus every day

[Rob Y]

i have been South Africa during three months .i have meet interested people.South Africa people have been very impolite and say that i must speak Zulu .South Africa is a country very developed ,the is many roads and building .i am live in Bedfordview and come to abc in a bus every day

I have been in South Africa for three months. I have met interesting people. South African people have been very impolite and say that I must speak Zulu. South Africa is a very developed country. There are many roads and buildings. I am living in Bedfordview and get the bus to abc everyday.