Short Paper - Please Judge!

Hello everyone -

I'm writing my first paper for a science journal and I'm a bit nervous about it. Because I haven't done anything like this before, I'm worried that I'm not able to step back and really judge the thing.

I'd be grateful if a person or two would let me PM them the paper so they can judge it. I'd rather not post it here publicly so people won't be referred to this page when they google the title/text. It's only 300 words (including title ;-)) so it shouldn't bore any volunteers for too long.

It's late at night here so I won't PM anyone till tomorrow morning.

Thanks so much