Please check my resume

[ambitiousBeginner]

Hello,

I've posted it here (not in a CV section) because the only thing what I need is checking that cv in terms of language mistakes :)

So please, check it, it's quite short:

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Objective:

Education:

Work experience:

Languages:

Personal info:

Activities:

[Gillnetter]

Hello,

I've posted it here (not in a CV section) because the only thing what I need is checking that cv in terms of language mistakes :)

So please, check it, it's quite short:

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Objective:
To obtain a challenging position as an Admin
Administrative Intern in with XYZ. It will be a great opportunity to increase my knowledge and gain work experience in the field of my interests, which I believe will bring benefits in the future. To maintain student status I am going to enroll for MA studies (1,5 year).
This section talks about you. What will you do for XYZ?

Education:
2004 – 2007 – 2nd Second High School in Prague. Education profile: mathematics and computer science.

From 2007 – Prague University of Technology. BSc studies on a in the Faculty of Computer Sciences. Field of study: computer science. Expected to graduate on 10 February 2011. Team engineering project – deploying a secure computer network based on public key infrastructure using MS Server Windows OS.

2009 – ITACAD in Bratislava. Completing the CCNA Exoloration: Routing Protocols and Concepts course. I have no idea what ITACAD OR CCNA means. If you are going to use these terms identify them first (International Science Year - ISY).


Work experience:
2004 – 2006 – Freelance editor at Magazyn CHIP (I wrote 6 six articles in different sections: tech-advice, webmastering and internet trends).

2007, 2008 – Resident assistant in Spain at XYZ travel agency (temporary holiday work).

2009 – Internship at XYZ (local ISP, 1 month: I was involved in deploying simple network hardware like such as: VoIP gateways, manageable layer 2 switches, desktop routers. I configured and practiced on Cisco Catalyst layer 2 switches).


Languages:
Polish – native.
English – upper intermediate oral and writing skills.

Personal and additional info:
2008 – A finalist at the 5th All-Polish Comeptition Competition of Computer Science.

From 2008 – Prague University of Technology scholarship.

2010 – I passed the Google Advertising Exam (as a part of the Introduction to Goole Ad-Words course led by Google Prague specialists)

2010 – A leader of an engineering project team at Prague University of Technology.


Activities:
Computer networks, basketball, football.

Gil

[ambitiousBeginner]

First of all, Gil, I really appreciate your work! Thank you!

Objective:
To obtain a challenging position as an Admin
Administrative Intern in with XYZ. It will be a great opportunity to increase my knowledge and gain work experience in the field of my interests, which I believe will bring benefits in the future. To maintain student status I am going to enroll for MA studies (1,5 year).
This section talks about you. What will you do for XYZ?

What about the sentence below at the end of this paragraph? Please proofread it if it's not correct.
I will make best effort to do all tasks that will be assigned to me because it is a job which I have always dreamt about.

And four more sentences I've just came up with:

- Basic knowledge of Java/C++ language.

- Basic knowledge of using XYZ and ABC //I don't know if the word using is correct (maybe 'operating' is better?). XYZ and ABC are the names of computer applications

- Advanced in the use of Microsoft Word, Excel, PowerPoint.

[Gillnetter]

First of all, Gil, I really appreciate your work! Thank you!



What about the sentence below at the end of this paragraph? Please proofread it if it's not correct.
I will make best effort to do all tasks that will be assigned to me because it is a job which I have always dreamt about.
It's Ok but it is fairly weak. Let me think about this tonight.
And four more sentences I've just came up with:

2009 – Data warehouse project for cinemas as a part of Data Warehouses course at Prague Univeristy University of Technology (reality analysis, problems identyfing identifying, data warehouse implementation, ETL process implementation, creating reports to the end user).

- Basic knowledge of SQL language.

- Basic knowledge of using XYZ and ABC //I don't know if the word using is correct (maybe 'operating' is better?). XYZ and ABC are the names of computer applications Knowledge is a good choice

- Advanced in the use of Microsoft Word, Excel, PowerPoint, Visio, Access. How about "Expert" in...?

Gil

[ambitiousBeginner]

Thank you again :)