unhappy employees

[dectator]

once upon the time, there where three employees sitting at their computers which were under the windows. those employees were so unhappy because they hate their work so much. their work was so silly and everybody can do it, the main reason that makes them accept this job was because they need money and the unemployment was so much at their country, and because their salary was good, but their job was rotenic to the extent that made them hate their work and hate their life either, they were forgetting every thing that they learned at their universities and they were becoming flat people. they were changing, some one of them even think too much of letting his job down but he couldn't dare to do that because he feared of the unemployment which was so fashionable at their country.

dear readers, can you give me your suggestions

[Raymott]

once upon the time, there where three employees sitting at their computers which were under the windows. those employees were so unhappy because they hate their work so much. their work was so silly and everybody can do it, the main reason that makes them accept this job was because they need money and the unemployment was so much at their country, and because their salary was good, but their job was rotenic to the extent that made them hate their work and hate their life either, they were forgetting every thing that they learned at their universities and they were becoming flat people. they were changing, some one of them even think too much of letting his job down but he couldn't dare to do that because he feared of the unemployment which was so fashionable at their country.

dear readers, can you give me your suggestions

Suggestions for what?
What they should do?
How to make their job more interesting?
How to stop forgetting what they learnt?
Whether this is a post about English?
Whether it belongs in the Editing forum?
How to improve your writing?