Thread: Tickets

Dear Rina / Marc,

Please find herewith attached the E-tickets for the 6 candidates listed below. Their flight has been confirmed on 5th of April (Tuesday) at 12:20 PM from Manila – Riyadh.

Please confirm their departure to arrange airport pick up.


1
Attencio Edgar
Forklift Operator
2
Lubuguin Raymond Cliff L
Accountant
3
Opiniano Tiodeo Jr.
Welder
4
Fuentes Eric Ivan
QC Inspector
5
Dayahan Randy
Welder
6
Teddy Gabut
Welder

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Originally Posted by shameera

Dear Rina / Marc,

Please find (herewith) attached the E-tickets for the 6 candidates listed below. Their flight has been confirmed on for 5th of April (Tuesday) at 12.20 PM from Manila – Riyadh.

Please confirm their departure to enable us to arrange airport pick up.

I don't think 'candidates is the word you want. How about just 'people'?