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[Ever Student]

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If you were the leader of your country, what would you do?


If I were a leader, I would become to be more fair and just. I would really let the people of my country feel free to offer their ideas and suggestions openly and fearlessly. I would be kind and honest at the time of ruling, while I would deal with the problems of the people so seriously.

[Gillnetter]

Title
If you were the leader of your country, what would you do?


If I were a leader, I would become to be more fair and just. I would really let the people of my country feel free to offer their ideas and suggestions openly and fearlessly. I would be kind and honest at the time of ruling while I was the ruler and while I would deal with the problems of the people so seriously.

Gil