introduction about /the Westward Movement/

[symaa]

hello,
What do you think about this introduction about/the Westward Movement/

To understand the history of USA, we cannot rely on one single fact such as: the mixes of races, the diversified economy and the highly accelerated industrialization, but among these events was the westward movement which is considered as an important historical phenomenon.

Regards

[Gillnetter]

hello,
What do you think about this introduction about/the Westward Movement/

To understand the history of the USA, we cannot rely on one single fact such as: the mixes of races, the diversified economy and or the highly accelerated industrialization, but among these events was the westward movement which is considered as an important historical phenomenon.

Regards

Gil

[symaa]

Gil

Thank my teacher you for your correction.
All the best.