Can someone check a text for me?

[arandomgirl]

Hello!
I've been assigned to prepare a short speech in english. I have to learn it by heart and correctly pronounce the words -> grammar doesn't count. But I think I should grab the chance and have it corrected by a British native speaker as I rarely do something like that. I would like someone to do that for me so I could see what mistakes I still do and what I should avoid + it would be nice to make it sound more british so there might be the need to change a word or two. :) I think I will finish it tomorrow. If there's anyone who would actually do that, please let me know.

[arandomgirl]

Okay, I've just done it! I hope there's someone willing to correct it for me.
(gone!)