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Old 05-Sep-2005, 03:14
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Default Please revise my pharmacy school personal statement

decided to remove my statement

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Default Re: Please revise my pharmacy school personal statement

I am not a great fan of direct questions in writing like this:
Why do I want to be a pharmacist?

They ask you the question, so we already know what the writing is going to be about.
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Old 05-Sep-2005, 16:24
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Default Re: Please revise my pharmacy school personal statement

i agree. i dont like these type of essay questions either.did you have any suggestions on how to make it better?
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