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05-Sep-2005, 02:14

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Please revise my pharmacy school personal statement

decided to remove my statement

Last edited by rxgirl; 09-Sep-2005 at 19:11.

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05-Sep-2005, 10:27

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Re: Please revise my pharmacy school personal statement

I am not a great fan of direct questions in writing like this:
Why do I want to be a pharmacist?

They ask you the question, so we already know what the writing is going to be about.

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05-Sep-2005, 15:24

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Re: Please revise my pharmacy school personal statement

i agree. i dont like these type of essay questions either.did you have any suggestions on how to make it better?

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