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  1. 05-Sep-2005, 03:14 #1
    rxgirl
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    Default Please revise my pharmacy school personal statement

    decided to remove my statement
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  2. 05-Sep-2005, 11:27 #2
    Tdol
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    Default Re: Please revise my pharmacy school personal statement

    I am not a great fan of direct questions in writing like this:
    Why do I want to be a pharmacist?

    They ask you the question, so we already know what the writing is going to be about.
  3. 05-Sep-2005, 16:24 #3
    rxgirl
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    Default Re: Please revise my pharmacy school personal statement

    i agree. i dont like these type of essay questions either.did you have any suggestions on how to make it better?
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