Hi, could you please correct or make the following text better?
"Our vision is to provide a reliable yet affordable educational center in our lovely city of Xxxx for all parents who really want their kids to learn English, not just for summer vacation!"
Thanks.
Rover"Our vision is to provide a reliable yet affordable educational center in our lovely city of Xxxx for all parents who really want their children to learn English, and not just for summer vacations!"
Thank you very much.