Three Boys Are NO Boys

[thedaffodils]

Could anyone please proofread the writing of mine? I want to improve my writing.

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Three Boys Are NO Boys

One boy is a boy. Two boys are half a boy. And three boys are no boys at all. There's a similiar Chinese proverb saying about the Chinese team work. Though, I feel ashamed, and wouldn't like to admit it, I have to say it is true.

Last week, an American supervisor of mine requested Peter, Mary, and I, three Chinese of us, to do a job together- testing the quality of packing from a potential supplier. I went to Peter, and he said he was very busy. So did Mary. They simply passed the buck. I was frustrated.

Later I told about this to another Chinese friend of mine. I told her I prefered my supervisor let me do it alone, and I could do it excellently, if she gave me the authority. She agreed with me.

[Tdol]

One boy is a boy. Two boys are half a boy. And three boys are no boys at all.

Where does this come from?

[februar]

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Could anyone please proofread the writing of mine? I want you to improve my writing.
Thank you very much!

Three Boys Are NO Boys

One boy is a boy. Two boys are half a boy. And three boys are no boys at all. There's a similar Chinese proverb saying about the Chinese team work. Even though (no comma) I feel ashamed, and wouldn't like to admit it, I have to say it is true.

Last week, an American supervisor of mine requested Peter, Mary, and me, the three Chinese of us from China, to do a job together testing the quality of packing from a potential supplier. I went to Peter, and he said he was very busy. So did Mary. They simply passed the buck. I was frustrated.

Later I told about this to another Chinese friend of mine. I told her I preferred my supervisor to let me do it alone, and that I could do it excellently, if she gave me the authority. She agreed with me.
februar (no teacher)

[thedaffodils]

Where does this come from?

Hi Tdol,

Here's the URL link from answers.com about that.

Two boys are half a boy, and three boys are no boy at all: Information from Answers.com

[thedaffodils]

Hello februar,

Vielen danke! Thank you very much for your help.