could you correct my writing?

[heart of happiness]

I study English as asecond language,and I hope to improve my skills special writing skills because I am very bad

So Iwrite small essay and I want every one correct It


Friends like sun shine in my life.They make my life has meaning.They help me when I need something.Also, when I sad they stop beside me.

I love my friends so much.Always I feel happy with them.Really, I can't express my feelings for them.I want to being with them all my time.

[Gillnetter]

I study English as asecond language,and I hope to improve my skills special writing skills because I am very bad
I study English as a second language and I hope to improve my writing skills because I am not good at writing.
So Iwrite small essay and I want every one correct It
So, I wrote a small essay and I want someone to correct it.

Friends like sun shine in my life.They make my life has meaning.They help me when I need something.Also, when I sad they stop beside me.
Friends are like sunshine in my life. They make my life have meaning. They help me when I need something. Also, when I am sad, they are beside me.

I love my friends so much.Always I feel happy with them.Really, I can't express my feelings for them.I want to being with them all my time.
I love my friends so much. I always feel happy with them. Really, I can't express my feelings for them. I want to be with them all the time.

Not too bad. You seem to understand how sentences are constructed. Keep working on learning English and you should be a better writer soon.

[heart of happiness]

Thank you so much!