will someone revise my job?

[lucakun]

Hi everyone!!

Would you please correct this email?? Style: informal

Hi Kay
In reply to your email, I'd say it's surely a good idea buying things on the Internet, in fact I'm used to getting different things on the Web, starting with clothes moving to appliances and even vehicles.
Certainly, it's an easier way to get whatever you want, just sitting on your chair in front of your computer, instead of going out and waste time.
As regards methods of payment I don't suggest you sending money via post, it's an unsafe way, whereas you should pay by credit card, bank transfer or cash on delivery.
Nevertheless whether you buy something wrong or find out that the good is damaged you can send it back and get your money without any matter, seeing almost all sites provide that.

What else can I say? You should just look for the things you need and enjoy your shopping online.
I'm sure you won't be disappointed.

Best wishes
Jack

[Gillnetter]

Hi everyone!!

Would you please correct this email?? Style: informal

Hi Kay
In reply to your email, I'd say it's surely a good idea buying things on the Internet (I'd say that buying things on the Internet is a good idea), in fact I'm used to getting different things on the Web, starting with clothes and moving to appliances and even vehicles.
Certainly, it's an easier way to get whatever you want, just sitting on your chair in front of your computer, instead of going out and waste wasting time.
As regards methods of payment, I don't suggest your sending money via post, it's an unsafe way, whereas you should pay by credit card, bank transfer or cash on delivery.
Nevertheless, whether you buy something wrong or find out that the goods is are damaged you can send it back and get your money refunded without any matter problems, seeing that almost all sites provide that.
(Nevertheless, whether you buy the wrong thing or find out that your purchase is damaged...)
What else can I say? You should just look for the things you need and enjoy your shopping online.
I'm sure you won't be disappointed.

Best wishes
Jack

Gil

[lucakun]

Gil

Thanks again!!