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More than 100 pages to read and re-read, with maximum informatics quality as well as an extensive regional coverage on key matters of the services that have mostly expanded and developed concerning the high speed access business. A true permanent consulting manual.

Is this correctly written, open to suggestions

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it sounds good.
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thank you very much ssendur
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".....developed concerning the high speed access business. A true permanent consulting manual."
this last part sounds a little ambiguous because of reduction of a clause into a phrase.
you may divide that sentence into two or use some conjunction words.
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Informatics?
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what do you mean "informatics?"?
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