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  1. 19-Oct-2005, 20:42 #1
    MIRIAMTTI
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    More than 100 pages to read and re-read, with maximum informatics quality as well as an extensive regional coverage on key matters of the services that have mostly expanded and developed concerning the high speed access business. A true permanent consulting manual.

    Is this correctly written, open to suggestions

    thanks
    Miriam
  2. 20-Oct-2005, 03:18 #2
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    it sounds good.
  3. 20-Oct-2005, 13:01 #3
    MIRIAMTTI
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    thank you very much ssendur
  4. 20-Oct-2005, 13:22 #4
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    ".....developed concerning the high speed access business. A true permanent consulting manual."
    this last part sounds a little ambiguous because of reduction of a clause into a phrase.
    you may divide that sentence into two or use some conjunction words.
    you are welcome
  5. 23-Oct-2005, 06:48 #5
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    Informatics?
  6. 23-Oct-2005, 07:41 #6
    ssendur
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    what do you mean "informatics?"?
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