Would somebody please comment my English. Thanks,
1-Referring to my first letter dated July 7th 2005, I hereby attach my offer of a place from the University of X, located in L and my research proposal.
2-At first, changing university is my last alternative, although from the experience of my PhD's advisor this is the best option for me.
I changed a bit sentence number 2.
2-Changing university is my last alternative, although from the experience of my PhD's advisor, it is the best option for me.
last alternative- do you mean you haven't wanted to do this? If so, I'd probably say 'final choice'. I'd say 'PhD' without the apostophe and would use 'supervisor'. ;-)
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