Letter

[dean]

Dear teachers,

Would somebody please comment my English. Thanks,

1-Referring to my first letter dated July 7th 2005, I hereby attach my offer of a place from the University of X, located in L and my research proposal.


2-At first, changing university is my last alternative, although from the experience of my PhD's advisor this is the best option for me.


Best Regards,
dean

[dean]

I changed a bit sentence number 2.

2-Changing university is my last alternative, although from the experience of my PhD's advisor, it is the best option for me.

Cheers,

dean

[Tdol]

last alternative- do you mean you haven't wanted to do this? If so, I'd probably say 'final choice'. I'd say 'PhD' without the apostophe and would use 'supervisor'.