Can someone help correct this TOEFL speaking section answer?

[DanChou]

Question:
state whether you agree or disagress with the following statement.
Learning through online course is more effective than learning in traditional classroom setting.

My answer:
Learning online is much more effective than learning in the traditional classrooms. First, the Internet provides us large quantity of resources than the classrooms. We can find answers to our problem by login on the BBS, or go to Google. But in the classroom, the only way to solve problem is asking teacher. Apparently, this is limited. Besides, the Internet offers us many valuable tools which improve efficiency. For example, we can record our learning process via software, or deliver our assignments immediately to teachers when we finish them.

[Gillnetter]

Question:
state whether you agree or disagress disagree with the following statement.
Learning through online course is more effective than learning in a traditional classroom setting.

My answer:
Learning online is much more effective than learning in the traditional classrooms (Either: in traditional classrooms, or, in the traditional classroom.). First, the Internet provides us a larger quantity of resources than do the classrooms. We can find answers to our problems by login logging on to the BBS, or go to Google. But in the classroom, the only way to solve problems is by asking the teacher. Apparently, this is limited. Besides, the Internet offers us many valuable tools which improve efficiency. For example, we can record our learning process via software, or deliver our assignments immediately to our teachers when we finish them.

Gil

[DanChou]

Thank you very much, I love you.

[konungursvia]

In most places, there are computers in classrooms. You haven't addressed whether online courses provide anything like life experience or memories in the way classroom environments do.