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    Hi All. Below is the body of an email that I wanted to send to a company. I wonder is the way mentioned in it the most professional way that can be used in the business field or not? If not, then please let me know what should be done?

    Regarding your advertisement posted on the Internet, I find in myself that I'm suitable for holding such a job. Kindly find the attached file my resume and cover letter, I wish that they exceed your expectations in regards to the job. I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon to elaborate on how can I qualified for working in this job.

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    Hi All. I wonder is such question acceptable in your forum or not? I didn't find any help till now although more than one has viewed my thread. Please let me know if such questions are not acceptable in your forum.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Economist2010 View Post
    Hi All. Below is the body of an email that I wanted to send to a company. I wonder is the way mentioned in it the most professional way that can be used in the business field or not? If not, then please let me know what should be done?

    Regarding your advertisement (Mention the specific job - Regarding your advertisement for a chef) which was posted on the Internet, I find in myself that I'm trained and very suitable for holding such a job. Kindly find the attached file my resume and cover letter in the attached file. I'm wish sure that they will exceed your expectations in regards to the job. I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon to elaborate on how can I qualified for working in this job.regarding this position
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