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[brahimsoft]

topic: some students like to attend a large university that has many
students ,others prefer to attend a small university that has fewer
students ,which type of university do you prefer ? use specific
reasons ans examples to support your answer
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After attending high school diplomate students usually apply for
an university .There are a lot of kinds of universities with a
different number of students .What's the best,a large one with a huge
number of students or a small one with a fewer number of students ?
For me a prefer to study in a university with a small number of
students where the environement of understanding and being understood
is present.More than that,communication between students and
professors is more accessible than we can see in a large university
with a huge number of students .Moreover, students usually aren't
abhored by university's presure and they feel more dynamic .i'd like
to study in an university with a small number of students where the
environement is accessible.however, many students prefer to continue
their study in a large university with a huge number of students .
In spite of being less undertood,students chose this kind of
university which is large with a huge number of students .More than
that , this kind of universities isn't able to cover all the students
and survey them .Moreover, this kind has a lot of groups with a
different relegions which attribute many conflicts and racial abuses
with students themselves.Aforementioned many students apply for this
kind of universities regardless its disadvantages .
Every students try to apply for an university where the
environement is accessible for him to continue his study in a good
condition.

[Tdol]

an university- a university (the sound is not a vowel sund- compare the sound with 'umbrella')
with a different number- different numbers
For me a prefer to study- I prefer (you could also delete 'for me')
where the environement of understanding and being understood
is present- where there is an environment of understanding
communication between students and professors is more accessible than we can- I'd say 'communcation between students and professors is easier that in a large university
students usually aren't abhored by university's presure- abhored s wrong- how about students are not under the pressures of a large university
students chose- choose
this kind of universities- university
with a different relegions which attribute many conflicts- with different religions which cause...
racial abuses with students- racial tensions /problems among students
Aforementioned- As mentioned
regardless- of
Every students try- Every student tries
in a good condition- in a good environment

[brahimsoft]

thanks a lot friend i'm very happy for your help

[Tdol]

You're welcome.