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[georgevi]

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What do u think about uniform in school?


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The subject of uniforms is interesting. In my opinion, I think it’s a good idea because students will feel like a team working together. Also it helps parents when they buy clothes for New Year. In addition, it decreases the amount of confusion students face when choosing clothes. Moreover, uniforms are easy to find for poor people, because a lot of shops sell them. Actually, students should think about education more than designer clothes worn by famous people. If some students don't accept them, we can change their mind by explaining the importance of wearing a uniform. In summary, I hope our students accept the idea for many reasons, for example, to save money to help our family. Finally, we should do our best to realize success.





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What do u think about uniforms in school? In English we always spell the word "you".


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The subject of wearing uniforms in school is interesting. In my opinion, I think it’s a good idea because students will feel like a team working together. Also, it helps parents when they buy clothes for the new year (There are at least two types of "new year. There is the start of a new calendar year and there is the start of a new year at school.One is capitalized (the start of a new calendar year), the other one isn't.). In addition, it decreases the amount of confusion students face when choosing clothes. Moreover, uniforms are easy to find for poor people, because a lot of shops sell them. Actually, students should think about education more than designer clothes worn by famous people. If some students don't accept them, we can change their mind by explaining the importance of wearing a uniform. In summary, I hope our students accept the idea for many reasons, for example, to save money to help our family. Finally, we should do our best to realize success .





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