a short story

[wisdomx]

Hi there,
I am new to this website and hope you can help me with my short story.
I have some grammer mistakes and not sure about using the appropriate words. Could you please give me some advise on which word is more convinient.. Thanks.

My uncle had a big ram which attacks anything that moves.In the morning When the sheperd of our villiage
opens the door of the stable, everyone hides himself/themselves.
The sheperd brings the flock back at sunset.One day I was playing somewhere near
the villiage forgetting about the flock's returning time. It was too late before I noticed
the angry ram. I wanted to run away from my location but the ram got me and bumped me and
I fell to the ground and rolled. As soon as I stood up ,the ram hit me again I fell under the ram
I managed to hold its horn. Now the ram could hardly move. I stayed that way for 4 or five minutes
until my father and uncle arrived and saved me.

[Gillnetter]

Hi there,
I am new to this website and hope you can help me with my short story.
I have some grammer grammatical mistakes and not sure about using the appropriate words. Could you please give me some advise on which word is are more convinientbetter. Thanks.

My uncle had has a big ram which attacks anything that moves. In the morning when the sheperd of our villiage village opens the door of the stable, everyone hides himself/themselves.
The sheperd shepherd brings the flock back at sunset. One day I was playing somewhere near the villiage village, forgetting about the flock's returning time. It was too late before when I noticed
the angry ram. I wanted to run away from my location but the ram got me and bumped me and I fell to the ground and rolled. As soon as I stood up, the ram hit me again I fell under the ram.
I managed to hold its horn. Now the ram could hardly move. I stayed that way for 4 four or five minutes until my father and uncle arrived and saved me.

Not too bad. Check your spelling and be sure to put spaces after a period or comma.