need opinions, Help

[danielkramer]

what do u think about this:

A complete analysis on the broadband state in each market: a characterization of the main competitors, their strategies and commercial positioning, as well as the Regualtory elements that affect its development. Moreover, basic indicators per country or region: total amount of broadband lines, market share per type of technology (if available), as well as operator’s market share (if available).

would you change anything?
Daniel

[Tdol]

broadband state- I'd just say analysis of broadband in each market
total amount of broadband lines- total number

[danielkramer]

Tdol
perfect, ill make the changes. thank you very much

Daniel