how would you improve this?

[danielkramer]

Hello everyone

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I would really appreciate your opnion on this.

thank you

daniel

[Dippit]

Hello everyone

If you prefer to receive this mail in txt format please contact ............

Do you need a "newspaper" english version

if you prefer not to receive these kind of mails in the future, please contact.................

I would really appreciate your opnion on this.

thank you

daniel

Hi Daniel,

If you would prefer to receive this mail in text format, please contact....

Do you want an English version of this newspaper?

If you do not want to receive further mail, please contact....
or
If you prefer not to receive this kind of mail, please contact...

Hope it helps,
Dippit

[danielkramer]

Hello Dippit

That’s Perfect, thank you very, very much

Daniel