how would you improve this?

Hello everyone
I would really appreciate your opnion on the following:


If you prefer to receive this mail in txt format please contact ............

Do you need a "newspaper" english version

if you prefer not to receive these kind of mails in the future, please contact.................

thank you

daniel

Hi all forum members! This is my first post. I am here on the suggestion of a fellow forum member. ;-)


Daniel: Can you first explain what a "newspaper" English version is? Do you mean a "paper" or "print" version?

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Originally Posted by danielkramer

Do you need a "newspaper" english version

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hello VenusEnvy

its the print version.

thanks
Daniel

I'd use 'print version' then- I didn't know what it meant until I scrolled down. You could use 'if you would prefer' as well, which might be seen by some as politer. ;-)