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I was born in 1983, I have got a classic schooling: primary then secondary school in my native city. At the end of the last year of secondary school, I graduate the degree in first try. It was a degree in scientific series with option biology. But I didn’t want to continue on this way, I have preferred to turn toward my first fondness: computing. For this reason, I have decided to do a 2 years degree in IT. I have spent two years in Rodez (in department AVEYRON) where I live in an apartment, and finally I have graduate this degree. Then, as I wanted to continu my studies, I head for the IUP GMI (computing and mathematics genie). Currently, I am in the first year of master in Avignon (in department VAUCLUSE) and I live in a student residence near the IUP.


Prosssional experiences
During my IUT’s studies, at the end of the second year, I have the opportunity to do a training period in enterprise during ten weeks. It was for me a good experience of the real condition of working in enterprise; beside I have learnt many things in the development of software and in team working. I have never do part time jobs but during the four last summers I have work with a friend in a conception of a web site. It’s a real good work experience for me.

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I was born in 1983, I have got a classic schooling: primary then secondary school in my native city. At the end of the last year of secondary school, I graduate the degree in first try. It was a degree in scientific series with option biology. But I didn’t want to continue on this way, I have preferred to turn toward my first fondness: computing. For this reason, I have decided to do a 2 years degree in IT. I have spent two years in Rodez (in department AVEYRON) where I live in an apartment, and finally I have graduate this degree. Then, as I wanted to continu my studies, I head for the IUP GMI (computing and mathematics genie). Currently, I am in the first year of master in Avignon (in department VAUCLUSE) and I live in a student residence near the IUP.

I was born in 1983. I received a classic schooling: primary then secondary school in my native city. At the end of the last year of secondary school, I received my degree on my first try. It was a degree in scientific series with option biology. But I didn’t want to continue in that direction. I preferred to turn toward my first love: computing. For that reason, I decided to pursue a two-year degree in IT. I have spent two years in Rodez (in department AVEYRON) where I live in an apartment, and finally I have received this degree. Then, as I wanted to continue my studies, I headed for the IUP GMI (computing and mathematics genie). Currently, I am in the first year of a master's degree program in Avignon (in department VAUCLUSE) and I live in a student residence near the IUP.

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Prosssional experiences
During my IUT’s studies, at the end of the second year, I have the opportunity to do a training period in enterprise during ten weeks. It was for me a good experience of the real condition of working in enterprise; beside I have learnt many things in the development of software and in team working. I have never do part time jobs but during the four last summers I have work with a friend in a conception of a web site. It’s a real good work experience for me.

Professional experience
During my IUT’s studies, at the end of the second year, I had the opportunity to do a training period in enterprise for ten weeks. It was for me a good experience of the real condition of working in enterprise; besides I have learned many things about the development of software and in working as part of a team. I have never do part time jobs but during the four last summers I have work with a friend in a conception of a web site. It’s a real good work experience for me. I never do part time jobs, but during the past four summers I have been working with a friend developing a web site. It’s been a really good work experience for me.

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