Formal letter

[e27182]

Could you please correct my letter?

Dear Sir or Madam

I am interested in studying (Subject) in the University of (Name) and would like to know if you are still accepting the applications.

I am a 19 year old EU student. I have finished school in 2011 July thus I already have the final grades and results of the examinations. Moreover, I am currently studying (Subject) in university in (Country).

If any further information is necessary in order to tell if my application could be considered I would be glad to provide you it.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours failthfully

(Name Surname)

[billmcd]

Could you please correct my letter?

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am interested in studying (Subject) in the University of (Name) and would like to know if you are still accepting the applications.

I am a 19 year old EU student. I have finished school in July 2011 thus I already have the my final grades and results of the examinations. Moreover, I am currently studying (Subject) in university in (Country).

If any further information is necessary in order to tell advise if my application could be considered, I would be glad happy to provide you it.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours failthfully sincerely,
(Name Surname)

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[e27182]

Thank you.