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[dean]

Would somebody please comment my English.

1- The decision of general practitioner's to start prescribe new drugs may be influenced by the seasons or places. For an example during winter or fall more asthma cases may be reported and more opportunity for them to prescribe new anti asthmatic drug. For that reasons, the results of this study may not represent other places with different weather.

2- Studied drugs have different introduction date. General practices may have different budget to buy new drugs in different period of the year. The more budget the easier for GP’s to prescribe new drugs (GP’s may running out of budget in the end of the year).



3-Different general practices may have difference policy or budget in order to prescribe new drugs for patients. The results of this study may be different if it was done in different places.

Thanks,

dean

[Tdol]

general practitioner's to start prescribe- general practitioners to start prescribing
general practitioner's to start prescribe- During fall or winter, for example,
and more opportunity - there may be more opportunity
introduction date- date or dates? the plural sounds more likely to me
have different budget- budget
The more budget- The bigger the budget
may running out of budget- funds at the end
difference policy or budget- differences in...
may be different if it was done- might...were

[dean]

Thanks for your comments Tdol.

Sorry for the late reply, I am away from the internets for couple of days.

dean

[dean]

and more opportunity - there may be more opportunity

More opportunity or more opportunities?


Reagards,

dean