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Please can any native speaker correct my text? Thanks
Please can any native speaker correct my text? It Thanks
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Here I am, I feel you, my passion is starting out. Talk to me, I was born to live, to have you now. There’s only us, me and you.,
Now please have me as you have always done; give me those shivers I like and need so much.
You are the drug I have always wanted.
You stay there in front of me; look at me and listen to me. I’m here to make you feel and let you know my emotions.
I’m here for you. That is what gives me the strength to stand up every day, to be really what I am.
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