Can someone help editing this little topic for me please!
Cats and Dogs
Around the world, many people own pets, which are animals they take care of. They do this because keeping a pet enjoyable. They can also keep pets for their friendly character. Two of the most popular pets are cats and dogs. In this essay, we'll compare the two to find out which is better.
Lets look at the facts! Cats and dogs are alike and different in many ways. First, let's look at how are they alike. Cats and dogs comes in many different colour and they can show love. But first they need love from their owner to show love to others. They have big ears.
Now lets see how are they different. Dogs bark and cats "meow". When a cat jumps from a high height, they usually land on their feet. But dogs land on any part of their body. Cats can spend lots of their time without getting lonely, in the other hand, dogs get lonely at one point. Dogs are night animals and cats are day animals.
We looked at how cats and dogs are alike and how are they different. But which animal is a better pet? Cats or Dogs? To find this, we have to look at the good things about dogs and the bad things about dogs. We also have to look at the good things about cats and the bad things about cats.
There aren't many good things about cats. Cats usually lands on their feet when they jump from a high height. Cats never bark, they actually say "meow", which is a good things because its more softer. Cats have good night vision.
Lets look at the negative facts about cats. Cats scratches a person very easily. An old woman owned a cat, her cat scrathed her knee while they were playing. Some people are allergic to cats. Cats have sharp claws and has small hooks on their tongues. The most boring thing about a cat is that they learn ver slow.
There are lots of good things about dogs. Dogs are friendly. They do tricks and are playable. Dogs can show love. Dogs have a good sense of smell. Unlike cats, dogs learns fast. They help out in physical situations.For instance, a fight. If there is trouble coming, dogs can sense it. The only bad things about dogs are that they eat alot and can be annoying sometimes.Not that annoying, they will just keep on wanting to play with you even if you are bored of it.
As you can see dogs are friendlier than cats. For example, cats have bigger claws and uses them more often. Dogs on the other hand, have great sense of smell and can save you with it. Dogs'll play with you alot and learn quicl. It's obvious dogs are better than cats.
Re: Can someone help editing this little topic for me please!
keeping a pet enjoyable- is enjoyable
Lets look at the facts!- Let's look at the facts.
different colour- colours
from a high height- from a great height
lots of their time without getting lonely- time on their own without...
dogs get lonely at one point- at some point (or how about all the time??)
Dogs are night animals and cats are day animals.- are you sure you have this the right way round?
We looked - We have looked
But which animal is a better pet? Cats or Dogs?- But which animal is a better pet: a cat or a dog?
Cats usually lands- land (plus, you have made the point about heights before)
its more softer.- it's softer/quieter
Cats scratches- scratch
scrathed - scratched
are playable- playful
dogs learns- learn
They help out in physical situations.For instance, a fight- They help out in physical situations, like, a fight
alot- a lot
sometimes. Not that annoying, they will- sometimes; not that annoying, but they will
uses them- use them (plus, aren't cats' claws sharper rather than bigger)
have great sense- have a great sense
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