Please help me with errors in my english cv

[nguyentuoi30]

I have just finished my cv for a job. But my english is not well to do it perfectly. Please help me correct grammar:

EDUCATION
From 2008 to 2012. HA NOI UNIVERSITY OF INDUSTRY

• Bachelor of Business Administration with a fair degree.
• Date of Graduation: June 2012

From 2004 to 2007. SOC SON HIGH SCHOOL

• The Second Prize Winner of the 2007 Ha Noi examination for gifted high school students in Mathematics.

WORK EXPERIENCE
Match – May/2012. Bookseller

• Used e-commerce to retail books at low price.
• Took order from customers by phone or email.
• Delivery in only 24 hours after confirmations.
• Provided a quality service to customers.

February/2012 Salesman at Tien Tho Bookstore

• Kept bookstands clean, aligned and sufficient.
• Introducing and finding out what customers want to get.
• Made them feel satisfied with goods and welcome.

September – October/2011. Waiter at Nam Son Restaurant

• Greeted guests at restaurant, took and served orders.
• Was required to assist co-workers in doing related duties.

All of my part-time work experience has helped me to be more confident, independent and keep good time management. Furthermore, I had learned a lot about computer knowledge and communication.
SKILLS
Computer

• Certificate in computing: B grade
• Advanced level in MS Word, Excel, Power Point, Outlook, Windows, Internet, Email.
• Intermediate level in MS Access, Project.

Especially, I can type fast with ten fingers and use electronic commerce for sale and marketing.
Languages

• English: Fair fluency. Toeic is 620 points.
• Vietnamese: Active fluency

ACTIVITIES
In school

• Key member of Students In Free Enterprise. Learned how to organize events about Sife teams, took part in other universities activities.
• Team leader for most of subject presentations in class. I was responsible for summarizing ideas and designing slides with power point. Our score is always more than or equal to 8 points. It also taught me the importance of listening, supporting and respecting the others. They are very useful skills when working in group.

Living life

• Play football in the role of a goalkeeper.
• I like riding bikes and travelling to different places.
• In my free time, I always read newspaper to update new knowledge, news and lastest events.

This is the end of the text. Thank you

[Barb_D]

You might want to do some reading on formatting resumes/CVs. We don't list things like "From year to year" but just the year of graduation, for example. We don't use full sentences and we're not conversational.

For example: Especially, I can type fast with ten fingers and use electronic commerce for sale and marketing.

Typing speed: 60 WPM
Fluent in social media uses for sales and marketing (Though if this is true, you should give some supporting statements and not just say so.)


Please take a look at some Web sites that talk about these things and redo your resume following that guidance and post again.

[nguyentuoi30]

Thank for your advice. That is so important. But how about grammar? Do you think i made some errors?

[Barb_D]

There is really no point in talking about grammar right now. The entire thing needs to be restructured.