Re: Reasons of bad grades in ENG103 course
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I'm sorry, but we cannot help correct your essay before you turn it in. If your teacher marks part as incorrect and you don't understand why, we can help you.
If you have a single sentence you are not sure about, or a word choice, we can help you with that.
But we cannot edit an entire essay. It's important for your teacher to know what you can do, not what we can do.
However, I can tell you a few things without violating this policy.
1) I can't tell if this is advice you are giving people so they do well in this course, or an explanation of why you did not do well. If it's advice, then I suggest you make it positive: How do to well, not how to avoid a bad grade.
2) Check your spelling. Your teacher should be able to help you with your grammar issues, but he or she should not have to tell you that "menssioning" is misspelled.
I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.