Re: Can someone edit my Grade 12 English essay?
I'm sorry, Donald, but most people will not do that.
Additonally, if this is an essay that needs to be turned in, we can't help you. Your teacher needs to see your work, not ours.
However, if you have a question about a particular sentence or the choice of a word or two, you can post that question directly in the forum. It's just that we can't evaluate an entire essay before your teacher has seen it.
I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.