first person - is this correct?

[Rover_KE]

Is there no Edit Post at the bottom of your post?

Only moderators can edit thread titles.

I've corrected it.

Rover

[new2grammar]

The exquisitely designed interiors that will leave guests speechless. It should not just be classy, but every artful detail should be able to daze the onlooker with sheer amazement. A true place of my dreams that surpasses my high expectations, everyday.

I have written the para in first person. Please let me know if above written para is correct

Thanks