Please correct this

Hello,

I am Avinash.I'm from India.I completed my graduation.But I'm very poor in English and hence I want to learn English for a better career.I should have done this few years ago.Any way better late than never, I started trying to overcome my drawbacks now.I came to know about this forum through a friend of mine.I've been observing various threads since two weeks and liked it a lot.I think this is the forum I need to improve my language.There are many native speakers and teachers in this forum.I will start posting about my doubts and I hope I will have a good time here.


Please correct the above paragraph.

Thank you.

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Originally Posted by Avinashh

Hello,

I am Avinash.I'm from India.I completed my graduation have graduated from (high school/college/university}.But I'm very poor in English and hence I want to learn improve my English for a better career. I should have done this a few years ago. Anyway, better late than never, I started am trying to overcome my drawbacks now. I came to know about this forum through a friend of mine.I've been observing various threads since for two weeks and liked it a lot. I think this is the forum I need to improve my language.There are many native speakers and teachers in this forum. I will start posting about my doubts and I hope I will have a good time here.


Please correct the above paragraph.

Thank you.

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Suggestions.

Hello, friend,
I would like to inform your grammatical mistake about using two words with preposition 'to' as you wrote in the passage ( I started trying so you should use to between two verb oky). and furthermore use capital letter before starting the new sentance. Thanks.

Best Reagars,

wasim raja

from

Pakistan

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Originally Posted by Wasim Raja

Hello, friend,
I would like to inform your grammatical mistake about using two words with preposition 'to' as you wrote in the passage ( I started trying so you should use to between two verb oky). and furthermore use capital letter before starting the new sentance. Thanks.

Best Reagars,

wasim raja

from

Pakistan

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Could you please highlight the part you are mentioning?
I used capital letters where ever it is necessary.

Please highlight the mistakes. :)

Thank you.