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please check tje grammar and correct me..
It’s good to hear that you are doing well! Last time when we met I figured that you are tired. I’m sure that not able to go home after each work day itself would be very tiring. If you let me know your schedule in advance, I would be able to work around your schedule.
* my grammar is very weak.. please correct me above letter. Thank you so much for your help in advance
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Re: please check tje grammar and correct me..
Hi Isydsmile,
Here are some suggestions for you. Good luck with your letter. :)
It’s good to hear that you are doing well! Last time when we met I figured that you are were tired. I’m sure that not being able to go home after each work day itself would be very tiring. If you let me know your schedule in advance, I would be able to work around your schedule it.
Also I'd probably change "I figured" to "it seemed that."
I might also change "I would be able to work around it" to "I'd be happy to work around it." (either works but personally I'd opt for the latter).
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