Can you check my grammar in sentences, please?

[duy065]

SATURDAY WET NIGHT
Now, at about 10:15 p.m. on Saturday night. This night is so wet, cold and tired. Right now, I start writing my diary. I feel very strange and embarrassing. I'm wondering when will I make my dreams come true. I've a lot of dreams, but now I'm thinking about how to make friendship with John - one boy in my class - to be closer. I don't deny that I like him. He's handsome, with a special hair, which front is curly and back is straight. He has got a sharp angular face, with the sexy eyes.

[duy065]

no one answer my question. It's hard to understand

[bestta]

Now, it's about 10:15 p.m. on Saturday night. This night is so wet, cold and tired. Right now, I start writing my diary. I feel very strange and embarrassed. I'm wondering when will I make my dreams come true. I've a lot of dreams, but now I'm thinking about how to make a friendship with John - one boy in my class - to get closer. I don't deny that I like him. He's handsome, with a special hair, which front is curly and back is straight. He has got a sharp angular face, with the sexy eyes.

[billmcd]

SATURDAY WET NIGHT
Now, at it's about 10:15 p.m. on Saturday night. This The night is so wet, cold and tired (??). Right now, I start have started writing my diary. I feel very strange and embarrasseding. I'm wondering when will I make my dreams come true. I've got a lot of dreams, but now I'm thinking about how to make friendsship with John - one boy in my class - to and be closer. I don't deny that I like him. He's handsome, with a special hair, which the front is curly and the back is straight. He has got a sharp angular face, with the sexy eyes.

I don't understand your use of "embarassed" or "tired" in the context written. Also, please be patient for responses to your posts. It is not necessary or polite to ask a second time for a response.