need help

[Nary]

some times when i am writing i have trouble with describing things or using the right vocab how can i get passed that step

[Tdol]

The easiest thing would be if you gave us a sample to look at- could you put a paragraph or a few sentences up as an example? That way, we can coment on the real language you're using.

[Nary]

Nary was walking down a road in the middle of the night trying to find her way back home, but she could not. it was too dark to see a thing and the rain was very thick to see throw. She sat down under a tree waiting for the storm to end as she closed her eyes and fell asleep.

[Tdol]

Ok:
Throw- this should be 'through' and I would say 'too thick to see through'- we don't use very + adjective + infinitive much
as she closed her eyes- how about 'then' as it's the next thing