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geographical distributions
Would anyone be kind enough to check the following paragraph? Thanks!
Purpose
Investigating the McDonald’s specialty of geographical distributions, shopping districts and customers to achieve the following research purposes:
1. Analyze McDonald’s distributions in Taipei.
2. Analyze the property at McDonald.
3. Analyze the management methods of McDonald’s.
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Re: geographical distributions

Originally Posted by
Ashiuhto
Would anyone be kind enough to check the following paragraph? Thanks!
Purpose
Investigating the McDonald’s specialty of geographical distributions, shopping districts and customers to achieve the following research purposes:
1. Analyze McDonald’s distributions in Taipei.
2. Analyze the property at McDonald.
3. Analyze the management methods of McDonald’s.
1. This is not a paragraph. It is mostly a list.
2. You spelled "McDonald's" three times. Why did you spell it "McDonald" once?
3. What sort of property would you analyze in #2?
4. Why is the article "the" used before McDonald's?
5. What does the first sentence mean? How does one investigate customers?
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