I was told recently that certain lines that i used in a particular letter are wrong english. I was wondering if you could tell me if that is the case.
1. At the end of a letter requesting a person to do a particular task. i wrote
"Hoping you could do the need be"---is this wrong and if so why?
2. Then after that I write "Thanking you" followed by yours sincerely. is this phrase correct or wrong and if wrong why?
thanks for your help