Please edit my writing letter and say my mistakes
I am influenced by your new satelite reciever
I Would like to know more about the prices and types and discounts the seller offer
Considering hd-tv , what do you suggest?
Could you send a catalogue and offer competitive price
I would like to make a decision on this soon,due to fact that I'd appreciate an early reply. Yours faithfully
Re: Please edit my writing letter and say my mistakes
You can edit your post and improve it a great deal by noting the following:
- Put a space after a comma.
- Proper nouns should be capitalised.
Edit your first post using those rules and then we can have another look.