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  1. 14-Jan-2013, 12:43 #1
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    Default It takes Effort to Win

    Have I ever won a trophy? Yes, I won the highest award of the school, Pastors Award. I was the youngest student ever to receive it.
    I had a lot of encouragement throughout the year. My teacher was so helpful. Every time I needed help, he would explain it. My family was also very encouraging. They told me never to give up, and that God will help me.
    I value the reward because it is an honour to win the Pastor's Award, since sometimes it's not even given out! Its given to a student who shows Godly character and excellent academic achievement throughout the year.
    I love this award because it is a reminder of how God helped me.
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    Default Re: It takes Effort to Win

    Welcome to the forum. Do you have a question for us?
    Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.
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    Default Re: It takes Effort to Win

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    Welcome to the forum. Do you have a question for us?
    Yes, would the above short essay have any grammer errors?
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    Default Re: It takes Effort to Win

    Quote Originally Posted by huckfieldsue View Post
    Yes, would does the above short essay have any grammar errors?
    See above for corrections. Your incorrect spelling of "grammar" is a very common error but it's important to get it right. When is your short essay due to be submitted to your teacher/tutor?
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