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  1. 21-Jan-2013, 17:47 #1
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    Default Please check my paragraph

    We have approached your company, as we have been over flooded with creative ideas to effectively grab the attention of your audience. To back our claims, we have a creative, media and production hub– all under one roof.

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    Default Re: Please check my paragraph

    "Overflooded" does not exist. Try something else.
    Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.
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