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I am currently into writing short stories and so far failed to complete one with a decent twist. I am halfway through one now as I came across this forum.

It begins with a devious boy in class, who has just decided renounce school. I know it isn't much to start with but any ideas for an ironic twist? It would be much appreciated.

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Default Re: Help with Short story please

Thomas Hardy wrote 'Life's Little Ironies', which is a superb collection of stories with twists and iromies that are so biting they hurt to read. Try the master for some inspiration:
http://www.ebooks3.com/cgi-bin/ebook...little_ironies
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Cheers, thanks mate. Its much appreciated.
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The twist would presumably revolve around the decision backfiring on him, so that his deviousness fails and in some way he loses out.
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