request letter for school admission in 1st std.

sir,
With due respect i like to inform that my son xxxxxx is now studying UKG in xxx matriculation school i would like to continue his studies in your esteemed schoolof ICSE syllabus at TVS GROUP.
To lead him to a bright future, i kindly request you to consider my request a admin him into your
renowned school.
thanking you.
with regards

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